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Legend of a Vampire ~ By Ichiharu
by Ichiharu Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:50 pm
Hi, I've recently started writing a story.
And now I'm posting it.
Part 1
Lemme know what you think ^_^
And now I'm posting it.
Part 1
- Spoiler:
- In a vibrant city out in some desolate plain, no one dares go near it because of the rumors. Some say monsters live here, some say it’s all myths the city doesn’t exist. It might be better off if it didn’t exist. It is a monster city, but none seem to get near or leave, apparently deserted. No one knows.
In some dark room in the city, the window is boarded up, strong sunlight can be seen through the gaps between the wood, with such dim light there isn’t much to be seen, a old ruined draws, empty bottles scattered around the floor and every inch of the floor and room seemed covered in dust and rubbish. There seems to be a corner filled with cushions, blankets and clothes, a man groaned sitting up off the pile in the corner rubbing his right eye, glaring at the window.
“Another wonderful day… Disgusting.”
The man stumbled up to his feet, standing 6 foot tall a dark bandana covering his head like a bandage, ratty long dark coat, no shirt underneath and torn jeans. Running can be heard down the hall outside the door to this room, a boy busted into the room breathing heavily trying to speak.
“Samson… He… He’s in trouble.”
The boy exhaustedly said.
“What’s happened this time? Dam that man he can’t step out the door without getting in trouble… Where is he?”
the Man groaned. The boy pointed downwards towards the window.
“He’s just at that pub, the usual one. Please help him Terry, I think it’s real bad this time.”
Says the boy quivering a bit still even now he’s calmed down.
“Eh? It’s Bad this time?… It seems to be bad every time for you Boy. Fine, you lead.”
Rubbing his head, cracking his neck and following the boy out of the door.
“Hold on.”
The man reached back in his room and slammed the door shut, he then looked down on the boy and nudged him in the back.
“Go on Boy, what’re you waiting for?”
Terry said bluntly. Looking up over the boy’s head, down the filthy hall. Two men holding what appeared to be Samson who’s been beating to a bloody mess not much can be seen of him being hung by this two men holding his arms.
“You two got a reason for this? Staining my hall is a bad thing to do.”
Terry said bluntly staring at the two men who glared back.
“Boss wants you to leave now or else”
one of the men said.
“Boss? Who sent two men to beat up me friend as a reason to get me out?”
Says Terry raising an eyebrow at these two men.
“How ‘bout you drop Samson now and I don’t kill you both.”
Says Terry as he steps forward in front of the Boy. The to men simply dropped Samson to the floor, Samson seemed to land on his face and groaned in pain.
“He said if you don’t agree to leave we may kill you.”
One of the men said as they both grinned up at Terry pulling small guns out aiming them straight at Terry.
“Don’t fire, else you’ll regret it…”
Terry began to say before the two men opened fire on him.The bullets were hitting Terry at random spots on his body spraying the boy behind him in blood, the boy seems motionless and scared.
“I said you shouldn’t do that.”
Terry said grinning at the men, dipping his right index finger in the hole just below his eye and licking it. The two men just dropped both their guns staring at Terry in amazement, Terry darted forward before anything was noticed he was behind the too men.
“Who’s first..”
Terry says as he leans forward placing his arms on the men’s shoulders. The man on Terry’s left quickly just turns with a knife in his right hand and stabbed Terry in the stomach.
“You?”
Terry said turning to the man who stabbed him, the man just screamed as Terry grabbed his arm firmly in his right hand.
Terry just sighed at the man’s attempt to stab him, he puts his left hand up clenched and puts it near the man’s face and in an instant he swung it hitting the man in the face with the back of his hand the mans arm completely tore off at the force and the man’s head now embedded in the wall to the left. “Looks like I’ll be moving house again” He says sighing at the dead man. Then turning to his man on the Terry opened his mouth, showing 2 viciously long, sharp teeth either side of his top jaw. Terry then clamped his mouth down on the man’s neck, blood trickled down from where Terry biting. Terry took his mouth off covered in blood, licking his lips.
“Ah.. Warm blood.”
He said letting go of the man, he just fell to the ground dead. Terry leant down to Samson,
“You ok mate?”
He said chuckling. Samson groaned again.
“Ok. Boy, Do you know if there’s a suitable Bed for him to rest on in here?”
Terry said turning to the Boy.
“No, I only ever come here for you.”
The boy replied slightly disturbed by what he’s seen. Terry then leaned back thinking, then he looked down and started picking out bullets from his body.
“I’ll Take him to the hospital after I find some suitable clothes.”
He muttered getting up and walking into his room.The boy followed but stayed in the hall keep an eye on Samson, Terry returns from his room with some cleaner newer black jeans on, he slung his coat off and went to the bodies of the two men, taking both their shirts and examining them.
“Eh. This one seems better fit for me.”
Terry puts the shirt on and brushes it down and looks at it again.
“Ok then, shall we go?”
Terry said to the boy, the boy turned to Terry and raised an eyebrow.
“What you going to carry Samson all the way to the hospital?”
Saying that the boy walked towards Terry and Samson, Terry began picking Samson up, lifting him onto his shoulder, then put his hand out for the Boy.
“Well of course. Can’t let him die here, eh?”
Terry said kneeling down towards the Boy grabbing him around the waist with his left hand picking him up. Terry ran out the door, then looked down the street, he ran to the corner. Terry looked down both roads and looked down at the boy.
“Which way to the hospital?”
Terry said and the Boy pointed to the left road. Terry ran down road carrying both Samson and the Boy. Terry then jumped onto wall in front of a house to his left and jumped onto the windowsill hopping from window to window to the roof then running along the roofs of houses.
“Which way next?”
The boy being a bit jolted how Terry was running tried to reply.
“Keep.. Going… Straight…”
The boy muttered, Terry looked at the boy then noticed there was a large gap between the houses crossing a road ahead. Terry sped up a lot, cracking the tiles he stepped on, all that could be heard was the rain of the cracked tiles falling. Terry leaped from the final roof, flying through the air to the next roof, he landed on the next roof smashing the tiles under him and sliding along the roof, before he lost momentum Terry hopped again and began to run again.
“Boy from now on could you just give me directions before the turns without me asking?”
Terry said continuing to run, his strides were the length of the average house under him, the pace he was moving was fairly unbelievable.
“No..”
Terry shook the Boy after saying that glaring at him.
“What? Boy..”
“There’s… no… need… it’s… straight… ahead… follow… the… road… around…”
Terry followed the instruction given a turn came and Terry hopped sliding around the turn on the roof, the tiles flying off the roof in a mass plastering the streets below. Terry hopped again, looking ahead on another straight street, spotting the hospital ahead, speeding up again from the sliding.
“Hah, Thanks Kid.”
Jumping from the last roof towards the hospital, landing on a car just in front of the hospital sliding a few yards, then hopping off, the car leant over a little then slammed back down on all 4 wheels, the whole top of the car was completely caved in from the landing. Terry set the boy down and shifted Samson into his arms carrying him in through the hospital doors.
“Anyone here that can help?”
Terry shouted a nurse spotted Terry holding the bloody mess of Samson, she appeared to run off and a few minutes later terry still standing in the entrance with Samson, the nurse returned with two doctors speedily wheeling along a bed.
“Please put the man down on the bed, Sir”
One of the doctors said to Terry who nodded and carefully set Samson down on the bed. The doctors swiftly sped off with the bed taking a little care to Samson as they moved, Terry just watched them speed off. The boy tugged on Terry’s hand.
“Is he going to be alright?”
“Yes I’m sure the doctors will keep him alive. Hmm, I think I’m going to go deal with that gang. Boy, keep an eye on Terry for me please, Samson has my number.”
Terry picked a phone out of his pocket and showed it to the Boy. The boy nodded at Terry and ran off through the hospital where they took Samson. Terry walked out of the entrance, brushed his clothes off again admiring the shirt.
“Heh, you don’t see this sort of quality everyday, that gang must have some money I’m guessing.”
Terry ran off back to where he was living, he stopped just around the corner from his house staring down the street there’s a blue van in front of the house, Terry looked around where he was and picked up a average sized steel bin, there appeared to be one man sitting in the van at the driving seat and possibly a few other guys inside the house. Terry walked up to the van and swung the bin around and let go letting it loose flying at the front window of the van smashing it and appearing to crush the man that was sitting in there Terry sighs as he looks in on the van with the crushed man in it, the man appeared to have the same style suit as the two guys before.
“A waste of good blood, but I guess this gang really wants to make an enemy out of me, hehe. Should be fun.”
Terry walks to the front door of the house and a man ran out of the house into Terry.
Lemme know what you think ^_^
Last edited by Ichiharu on Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:52 pm; edited 1 time in total
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Re: Legend of a Vampire ~ By Ichiharu
by Ichiharu Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:51 pm
Part 2
- Spoiler:
- “Oh, hi I wondered what you were doing in my house.”
The man screamed at the sight of Terry jumping back and pulling his gun out and firing with his eyes shut, when he opened his eyes he couldn’t see Terry in front of him.
“I really don’t like guns.”
Terry said now standing behind the man, he placed both his hands on either side of this man’s head and twisted it lifting it from the body at the same time, the head tore off the body and the body fell to the floor twitching a lot. Terry turned the head around and looked at it’s face, eyes widely opened, staring up into the eyelids, mouth wide open, this expression seemed to amuse Terry.
“Hahaha. Man these gangs must hire anyone and everyone now. Hehe, long time since I done that though, I forgot how fun it was…”
Terry said as he turned watching a man run into the hallway gasping at Terry holding his partner’s head, shaking around a gun in his right hand aimed at Terry. Terry looked to a side at the obviously scared man.
“Oh, hi there. I’ve tried asking your friend here what here was doing in my house, just didn’t really get an answer, as you can see. Heh”
Terry said pointing to the severed head in his right hand, he then looked at it and threw it lightly at the scared man.
“Do you want to answer my question? I thought since you’re still alive and all, you might be able to answer.”
Terry said as the man stumbled back away from the head as it came his way it landed on the floor. The man stared at it quivering stepping back a bit more, looking up at Terry pointing his gun at him trying his best to keep his hand still. Terry walked towards him and the man stumbled back little by little, tripping over the already dead bodies in a pool of blood.
“Hey Come on now. Are you going to answer me?”
Terry said again, still walking towards the man on the floor. Terry got to the man and knelt down in front of him, poking the gun from a side, which is aiming at his forehead. The man still shaking pulled the trigger. Shooting Terry in the head, Terry leant his head back from the force looking up. He then moved his head back and drove his fingers in the hole on his head.
“That… Hurt.”
Terry got the bullet and looked at it in his hand, the hole on his head simply closed. The man dropped the gun and scrambled to his feet running deeper into the house. Terry followed walking steadily.
“Come back I only want to ask a few questions.”
The man clumsily ran around a left corner in the hall and into the first door he found on his right slamming the door shut. Terry got to the hall where the man fled to and still walking calmly, let out a big sigh. Gripping the handle of the door the man ran into and pulled it, ripping the door off it’s hinges.
“Now, do you want to talk, in this awkward position you’ve put yourself in?”
The man still quivering at the sight of Terry, Terry looked down then glared up at the man. In an instant Terry threw himself forward, grabbing the man by the throat with his right hand and sliding him up the nearest wall.
“Now are you ready to answer my questions?”
The man gripping Terry’s hand with both hands kicking all over the place struggling to get free from Terry’s grip. Terry shifted his hand in an quick anti-clockwise motion breaking the man’s neck. Terry dropped the man’s dead body and looked around the corridor he was in.
“Can’t hear anything else in this house. Dam.”
Terry walked out of the house picking up the severed head and when he was out the door he gave it a swift kick, sending it into the distance down the street. Terry went into the van and looked through it searching for anything. The Radio buzzed and a mysterious voice came on.
“Hello, what’s happened at the house, is the man still alive?”
Terry raised an eye brow at the radio, grabbing the mic and looking at all sides of his, then shook it near his ear. He searched the mic over again and found a button on the top right of it.
“Hi, This is Terry here, Uhm… When are you going to come clean up these 5 bodies you’re so gracefully given me?”
“What? You killed them all?”
“Take a guess and you might get lucky.”
“There’s no way. Anyways stop joking around, what’s happening?”
“Eh. I am Terry! Heh… You know anything can happen in this town, I’m not the only “Monster” Here you know.”
“Monster?”
“Yes monster you idiot.”
“Monsters don’t exist, haha, stop joking around.”
“Ok then where do you want me to deliver the bodies of your gang then?”
“Ok I’ll play along, one of your jokes again eh, there’s a map under the Radio remember.”
Terry puts his hand under the radio and pulled out a bit of paper.
“Ah, I didn’t notice that, Thanks, So you’re where the X is?”
“Yup where we’ve always been and stop it with the jokes. It’s very unprofessional”
“Ok, Over and Out?”
The radio buzzed and stopped making any sound.
“Well I guess I’m lucky the owner or leader of this group was a Joker.”
Terry got out of the van and analyzed the map picking out which spot was his house and where to go next. Terry jumped to the roof of the house to his right and looked around keeping a check on the map to see where it’s meant to be. He then turned the map and turned to the right facing to the back of his house.
“Ah, that’s it.”
Terry began running from roof to roof, faster than before since he’s alone. His phone began to ring, Terry stopped and pulled the phone out.
“Uh, Terry Samson… Is gone… The doctors did all they could, but the damage to his body he couldn’t survive it. Sorry.”
The Boy begins to cry and Terry just begins to get angry at the loss of his friend.
“Don’t Worry Boy, when you’re done there just head home and forget about me. It’s my fault he’s dead.”
“But what are you going to do?”
“Just… Forget about me and get home safe.”
Terry stopped the call and his eyes were watering, he lowered his head and pinched the bridge of his nose. Loosening the pinch on his nose and wiping the tears away with his forearm. Terry sighed and looked up at the sky.
“This is why vampires shouldn’t have friends.
I’ll miss you mate, Try finding heaven for me… Please.”
Terry put his hands together and shut his eyes like praying, he stood still like this for a minutes praying for Samson, then wiping his tears away. He pulled out the map and looked at it again. Found his way and began running in the direction again. His eyes still watering, he landed in what appeared to be some wasteland outside a factory, filled with white, gray and yellow gravel. He walked across the gravel to the factory, the crunching of the gravel under his feet was the only sounds of his current war path. The side of the factory had a door, it had a cement ramp and what appeared to be iron railings, which he spotted there was a guard there, in front of the door.
Terry ran at a incredible speed straight at the door, Terry jumped about 10 meters from the door, moving his body to hit the guard with both fee. The guard spotted him but it was too late, Terry planted his feet on the guard’s face, grabbing the top iron railing tearing it from the post it was on. Hitting the guard at such a speed blasted the guard crashing straight through the door. Terry landed a couple meters in, the guard slammed into some cargo about 20 meters from the door. Three men surrounded Terry in 10 seconds, the door now on Terry’s left surrounded him one man in front of him, one behind and one on his right.
Terry glared at the man in front, he ran straight at the man driving the iron railing he caught straight through the center of the mans chest. Ripping it out and turning for the man across from the door, the man furthest away began firing at Terry, hitting Terry’s left cheek. Terry ran at the furthest man, throwing the iron railing at the man across from the door, it impaled him through his left eye. Terry dived at the last man tackling him at shoulder height, biting his neck and tearing it away ripping the left side of the man’s neck off, spraying blood all over.
Terry walked past the door again going to the left of it, Terry’s cheek simply healed again in a few seconds. Terry met a steel wall, he just punched through it and ripped the hole in the wall bigger. There appeared to be an office the other side of the wall, when the hole was big enough Terry stuck his head through it. Looking at three terrified men, backing against the opposite wall.
“Hello I’m Terry.”
Terry said that and simply tore through the wall and stepped through, the three men pulled out their gun and opened fire on Terry. Terry was hit by every bullet splattering what’s left of the steel wall behind him in lots of blood. The three men emptied their magazines on Terry, who’s face just looks a holey, bloody mess, Terry grinned cruelly at the three men.
“My turn.”
The three men screamed and tried running for the door, which they locked in attempt to keep out the intruder. Terry ran to them, on man was at the door attempting to open it, the other two waiting either side. Terry just appeared behind the center man, ramming the man’s head straight through the glass of the door, killing the man instantly. Terry, then cropped straight through the right man’s neck, grabbing the severed head and ramming it in the last mans head, not enough to knock him over though, Terry threw the head to a side and grabbed the man by his shirt neck in his right hand.
“Now I’m giving you one chance to live, answer my questions or else.”
“Yes I’ll do anything, please don’t!”
“Ok then, Where’s the boss?!”
The man shaking like a leaf in fear pointed to another map on the desk the other side of the room, Terry, set the man down on the floor and walked over to the desk, cracking his neck and jaw, bullet dropping out from everywhere. Terry picked up the map in his right hand showing it to the scared man and pointing to it with his left hand, the man nodded with both his hands up.
“Ok thanks. Good night.”
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Re: Legend of a Vampire ~ By Ichiharu
by Ichiharu Sat Oct 18, 2008 11:52 pm
Part 3
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- Terry ran at the scared man screaming “WAIT!” brutally punching through the man’s heads and removing his fist swiftly, dripping in blood.
“Tch, Like I’d have mercy.”
Terry picked up the severed head bouncing it in his right hand, wrapping the map and folding it into his pocket. He stepped out the hole in the wall, the first person he saw through the hole was a woman holding a machine gun. Terry threw the severed head straight at her, her eyes just widened as it flew at her. The head hit her and she fell back on her ass shrieking loudly. Terry simply walked out and scaled the side of the factory to the roof. He got the map out and it had in bold red “YOU ARE HERE”, then a thick black line covering the roads to another marked location. Terry sighed.
“Wow that’s good… Two hideouts. both on opposite sides of this dam city.”
Terry walked to the opposite end of the building and turned around looking in the direction he came from. He ran and jumped off the roof, clearing the wasteland. Landing in the middle of a road, turning to the side and a car suddenly beeping at him.
“Oh, Cr….”
The car’s wheels screamed to a holt, but still crashed into him knocking him flying a few meters. The man got out of the car shaking Terry by his shoulder.
“Are you ok?! Are you OK?!”
The man was saying repeatedly, Terry steadily sat up scratching his head. Then looking to the right at the man, who’s now backed off a bit from Terry, he looks scared. Terry stood up brushing himself off putting his hands up and turning around to see everyone and saying.
“I’m ok, Don’t worry I’ll be fine.”
Terry walked off down the road, once he was around the corner he jumped back onto another roof to his right. Getting the map out and pointing to the place he should be, then to the place he wants to be. Terry ran and jumped across to another house, falling straight through the roof into what seemed to be a bath. He looked around and there was a naked woman in the corner of the room singing, listening to rather loud music.
“Wow… That roof needs seeing to.”
Terry said looking straight up, the woman turned an screamed attempting to cover her chest and privates with her hands. Terry got up, winking at the woman snapping his fingers and pointed at her.
“Well you’re certainly beautiful, I might drop by later, haha.”
Terry laughed and jumped up back through the hole in the roof and climbed back up to the top and sighed.
“Ah, It’s been a while since I’ve seen that. Teeheheee.”
Chuckling to himself and getting the map out of his pocket, it simple fell apart because it got drenched in the bath water. Terry had sort of memorized the map though. He began running along the roof again.
“Hmm, wonder if that woman was a normal human, they seem to be coming back to this city.”
Terry continued running and jumping from roof to roof, cracking tiles all over where he went. He stopped on a roof at the opposite end of the city, looking over at what seemed to be a very smart mansion, Terry stared at it and looked into what of the map he kept.
“Well according to this.. That’s it. Wow, This gang must have a nice amount of money.”
Terry jumped down from the roof to the street, swinging from the top of a street light and to the other side of the road, he walked, then looked down at the shirt he had now it’s all messy, full of blood and holes. Looking back at the mansion.
“I hope they got more of these”
Terry looks over to the road leading to the mansion and sees a fairly well built, posh/luxury gates. Terry looked to his side and there was a wall that led from the gate to a little way further behind him. So Terry jumped up on top of the wall, coincidentally there’s a camera on the wall just below himself on the other side, Terry reached down and tore the camera from the wall and dropped it, the camera just swung around by on cable against the wall. There was also a guard with a machine gun, standing in a clearing of grass, which appeared to be the front garden of the mansion. Terry jumped down from the wall and kept hidden amongst the trees behind the guard. Terry walked from side to side, tree to tree, he was near the guard now, Terry leapt forward grabbing the man by the throat with one hand and the other over the man’s mouth, twisting his head around completely, Terry laughed at the man’s head facing backwards.
“Hehe, I was trying to rip your head off. This just looks wonderful! heh.”
Terry chuckled to himself dragging the guard’s body into one of the trees, placing the body where it shouldn’t fall. Terry took the shirt of the guy examining it.
“Wow that is a strange stroke of luck”
The shirt seemed to be good enough size. Terry took his shirt off and put on this guy’s shirt. Terry jumps down from the tree looking around again, he ran into the garden, running through straight towards the mansion. Terry jumped over a small stream, stopping behind another guard leaping at him, throwing a right punch at the man’s head, the man began to turn as Terry leaped ending up getting punched in the face and knocked out. Terry walked away from the man, finding a side door, looking in and then around. Terry then put his elbow through the window of the door and opened. Terry stepped in and looked in searchingly for anyone, he didn’t see anyone around.
Terry walked towards the door and put his ear to the door, he could hear some sort of boring slow music and people talking rather poshly, he opened the door and looked around, there was a small door to his left, some stairs going up and a hall along the side, which appears to go off the to the right behind the stairs, the music was much louder now. Terry looked down the corridor and saw no one there, just portraits along the wall, some of people and some just paintings.
“Eh… I don’t get it, such a posh style house and everything and apparently somewhere in here there’s the boss of that stupid gang. What’s wrong about this?”
Terry walked up the stairs and looked around again the walls were plastered with lots of frames, there was some different music coming from a room up here, sounded like that calm pop music. Terry walked steadily down the corridor, about three doors on the right the music was loudest, Terry put his ear to the door and could hear some laughter and chatting. Terry stood in front of the door readying himself to burst in, a gun shot sounded, something the shape of a small christianic cross flew through the door, into Terry’s left shoulder pinning him against the wall behind. The wound where the cross was sizzled a little smoke hissing of from it.
“Gah, cross.”
Terry glares at the door and dived his right hand into his wound grabbing the cross and pulling it out, his hand sizzled from the touch of it. Terry kept hold of the cross in his right hand, he threw himself through the door, waiting till he could see anything and threw the cross at some guy’s head to the left, the shear force of the throw made the cross hit and punch straight through two men’s heads, firmly embedding itself in a third mans back of the head, all three of them men wore white, priest like robes, Terry landed on the table in the center of the room looking around.
“That hurt… Eh… Priests?”
A fat guy at the end of the table laughed, the priests were chanting something, Terry knew it weren’t in his best interests to hear this chant to the end. Terry dived at the first of the 3 last priests on the right of the table, stabbing through the priest’s left side chest with his right hand, ripping his hand out and stepping as if gliding to the next priest, hitting the second priest under the chin with his left hand. The force of hitting the priest broke his neck, then with his right hand he slammed the second dead priest’s head into the third priest’s head, the collision was very messy, spraying blood throughout the room. The fat man at the end still laughing, Terry glared at the man.
“What’s so funny, you haven’t won!”
Terry shouted at the man, all the man did was laugh and point at some beastly, green guy with black horns standing besides the door Terry broke through. The beast stepped forward, placing his hand under the table Terry was still standing on and threw it up. Before Terry had chance to recognize the demon he was set through the roof on the table, Terry jumped off and landed on the mansion roof, coughing a little blood.
“I don’t know what sort of demon that is, but me coughing blood is only a sigh of a good foe, I shall savor this battle.”
The beast jumped up through the hole, as Terry was talking, hitting him with a powerful right hook, sending terry flying into a chimney, demolishing have the chimney in an instant, Terry stood up and shook it off, cracking his neck, the beast grunted. Terry ran towards the beast thing, the beast ran at Terry. Terry jumped aiming a drop kick at the beast, the beast simply smacked Terry down, cracking the tiles under him. Terry jumped up, punching the beast with a right uppercut, the beast groaned a bit and aimed a punch for Terry’s stomach, Terry caught the beast’s hand in his left hand and grinned at the beast with his new red eyes with black slit pupil.
Terry slammed his right elbow into the beast’s forearm, releasing it’s hand and giving a left hook, knocking two of the beast teeth out, Terry spun through the punch and ended the spin aiming a left kick for the beast’s stomach, making it cough up a lot of green blood. Terry stepped back punched the beast leaning forward winded with his right hand, the beast got knocked back a few meters and fell through the hole into the man’s room.
“Dam it, I let my demon essence out a little too much. He didn’t last very long.”
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Re: Legend of a Vampire ~ By Ichiharu
by Ichiharu Mon Oct 20, 2008 4:29 pm
*sighs*
So no one likes my story?
I'm still writing more for it.
I only made it into parts since I'm also posting it on another site, so i thought it'd be easier to just keep them at the same position of story with the parts xD
So no one likes my story?
I'm still writing more for it.
I only made it into parts since I'm also posting it on another site, so i thought it'd be easier to just keep them at the same position of story with the parts xD
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